Memories….(Poem)
When was the last time you looked into my eyes,
When was the last time you spoke those words,
Why is it so hard to recall all those precious moments,
Why are the memories drifting away,
I try to stop them from floating,
But it seems they are oblivious of me,
As I turn away dejected,
I hear a soft whisper,
With a pounding heart I turn around to see if they are back,
And I see a silver fog that descends upon me,
It murmurs in my ear,
Old memories are far away and new ones are here to stay,
I embrace them and take them with me,
Because I know it is you who has sent them my way.
q8 replied:
oh wow……rimpi…that is a beutiful poem.
i just love it….
August 16, 2007 at 11:52 am. Permalink.
Rim replied:
Thanks
September 13, 2007 at 9:14 pm. Permalink.
Rimpi replied:
I love the transition form in poetry, from past to the future, from bleak to excitement, from despair to hope. Your poetry reflects a wonderful transition of memories, conveys a beautiful message. Totally loved it. Do not ever stop writing.
November 26, 2008 at 12:47 pm. Permalink.
Rim Thakar replied:
Thanks!!! Its always great to hear encouraging words
December 4, 2008 at 9:56 pm. Permalink.