White… (Poem)
Running through the fields dazed,
I see the clouds scattered above,
They make me want to jump high,
And immerse myself in their snowy white,
I feel the mist around me,
Engulfing my entire being,
Treading upon the floating layers,
Loneliness feels like a pleasure trip,
The sweet whispers of the wind,
Promise a heavenly glimpse.
ashmu replied:
Hey Rimpi being an English Literature student i would love to attempt a short critical appreciation of your poem with quotes……..
Optimism and joy seems to be the central theme of this poem. The poet is in a state of exhilaration “running through the fields dazed,
I see the clouds scattered above,
They make me want to jump high,
And immerse myself in their snowy white,
I feel the mist around me,” The poet also enjoys the tranquility of solitude and the serenity of nature “Loneliness feels like a pleasure trip,
The sweet whispers of the wind,
Promise a heavenly glimpse. The content of the poem conveys a lot of actions and movement,this reflects the excitement of the poet and also tells us a good deal about her imagination and dreams. The poet in this poem is oozing confidence and positivity.
June 9, 2007 at 9:21 pm. Permalink.
Rim replied:
Hey Ashmu,
Thanks for the critial appreciation
This is my first attempt and I am glad that you liked it. 
-Rim
June 21, 2007 at 3:04 pm. Permalink.
q8 replied:
its a beutiful poem……wanted to read more so i come to your blog almost everyday…
July 30, 2007 at 4:23 am. Permalink.